VER:1 AND 2 OF A POETRY COMPETITION ENTRY.


EDIT: NEW VERSION UP THIS IS WITH ALL THE CORRECTIONS MY TUTORS TOLD ME I'M OK WITH IT BUT YEEE NAAAARRR!!!

REALLY HAPPY WITH HOW THIS TURNED OUT IT'S ALMOST EXACTLY HOW I IMAGINED IT WHICH IS LIKE THE ILLUSTRATORS MAIN GOAL GETTING ALL THOSE DAFT IDEAS FLOATING AROUND IN YOUR HEAD ON IN TO AN IMAGE!! CHUFFED HOWEVER IT IS ONLY VERSION 1 I'M SURE MY TUTORS WILL HAVE SOMETHING NEGATIVE TO SAY ABOUT IT BUT HEY THATS LIFE RIGHT I REALLY LIKE IT SO WHATEVER ENJOY!!!

4 comments:

  1. oh god it's brilliant! You'll probably win. Now I regret picking the same poem as u. x

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  2. This is amazing like! Absolutely spot on! How are you gonna spend the money?

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